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I think it's so hard to capture believable dialog, but there's moments in here that sound like they're legitimately from a real conversation that you recorded. I'm a big fan of people kind of just wandering around a city late at night. There's never enough of that kind of content. I'd love to see this expanded into a series or comic. Keep up the amazing work. This definitely deserves more love.

sugarofcube responds:

Thanks, that means a lot (:
I'm more of an artist than a writer for sure, so I manage a lot better at writing a plot and dialogue that don't do much heavy lifting on their own but serve to add to the artistic, romanticized moments that feel more immersive and real, and carry the 'vibe' across. So I'm really glad that came across!

This has a LOT of potential. Heroes who are middling at their jobs are always a fun thing to explore. A lot of the gags work here. I'm hoping to get more of a feel for Loriner and Jessie's dynamic a bit more in the next episode. I get that Lornier is kind of the wacky one, while Jessie is grounded, but I feel like they switched on and off depending on the gags. Not that you CAN'T do that, but in a five minute short, it kind of distracts from what archetypes you're trying to establish. Other than that, not a whole lot to complain about honestly. Great work!

Love me some Joel! So cool that you got him for this.

You are a master of this aesthetic, keep up the amazing work! Congrats on being in Daily Picks!

I have minor notes in terms of the pace in regards to editing (mostly just letting a shot linger here or there), but this was REALLY impressive and I would love to see more of this concept. Really fun character designs and a great vibe.

I love What If... so much. Cute underrated romcom.

MAN, THE BOOGLIN NEEDS TO CHILL OUT

This and the Halloween special have always been my favorites. The villain mascot designs are so fun!

Sometimes only the devil understands.

Extra half star for that ending. Truly great.

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